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Post by violet on Nov 24, 2012 15:59:30 GMT -5
You say that she "doesn't rely on her devil fruit powers" in your fighting style... when she has no devil fruit powers to rely on in the first place. You should probably mod that.
Write what Devil fruit she has either in the equpiment section or in the Devil Fruit section. If in the Devil Fruit section, make sure you write next to it that she hasn't eaten it.
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Post by violet on Nov 25, 2012 0:32:04 GMT -5
I just don't really get your techniques. Your sword has the power to curve or what?
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Post by violet on Nov 25, 2012 12:30:25 GMT -5
Just one last thing. Feel the occupation at the top where you say "Pirate" with what she does.. Swordsman, Marksmen, Cook, or whatever. You should also fix your thread title to the way it says on the character template thread.
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Post by violet on Nov 25, 2012 14:58:29 GMT -5
Alrighty! Approved
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